~madeline~

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euphoria fashioned from stanzas of

disillusionment

est. 8.19.20

Message to Readers

K, so I really want to write a song, but I'm not really sure how to go about it... any tips?

remnants of what is to come

October 28, 2020

FREE WRITING

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melancholic fancies drift down from the sky. 
colorful tears that fall from the eyes,
of the trees that stand so proud and high. 

the joy of the pigment combines with new death.
a fanfare of brilliance that comes with last breaths ,
shows in the paintings that ‘round trees enwreath. 

hailing a time where creation will sleep
when the trees will stop with their picturesque weeping
and snow on the ground will only keep deepening.
 
but with a dark night there will always be morn. 
new growth, new spring, new daylight, new dawn.
and and again the green of new life will adorn. 

 
Ahh. Fall... Somehow we still have leaves on the trees which is practically unheard of at this time of year where I live. But I'm loving every second of it. And I can never do it justice, but here's my best attempt...

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13 Comments
  • anemoia (#words)

    wow. this felt like something i'd read in english and actually enjoy. i love the fall metaphors. "colorful tears that fall from the eyes." dang. that. is. poetry! oh, and it rhymes. terrific piece.


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    Re: yep. Thank you!


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    Re: well that’s good at least! But I’m sure it’s a big challenging. Praying for you!


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    Re: thanks! Yeah, it’s neat! I like high school (of course i am actually homeschooled). What about you?


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    Re: I’m in 9th grade. And writing is my favorite! XD I also like that we have a Bible study though. What about you?


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    Re: I hope you all stay safe too! I’m well, thanks for asking! And Zi is too. School is good as well. I’ve been busy though!


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    This is DEFINITELY one of the most AMAZING POEMS I HAVE EVER READ! Just wow. And I came to ask how you’re doing. What’s up with you?


    6 months ago
  • queenie

    the euphoria in this piece ahhhhhhhhh
    i wanna have a latte rn ;(((


    6 months ago
  • rwong

    wow this is so beautiful!!! <33 I'm doing alright, still somehow trying to figure out all my lovely homework. how have you been?


    6 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    wow, this is gorgeous!! the rhyming is perfect--it really adds just a little bit of easy class, if you know what i mean. wonderful poem!! :)


    6 months ago
  • mirkat

    beautiful! <3


    6 months ago
  • midnight.summerrose

    Wow, you DID do it justice!! This piece is truly magical, I love it! You are so talented! The way you portray it is just amazing!! :) I'm good, but drowned in homework! How are you? <3


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    Re: aw thanks! It’s actually Katniss! :)


    6 months ago