Cosmogyral

United States

and i am tired,
so very tired.

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

October 24, 2020

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XXXVII. do you know who you are?
not a real person, 
the ending should hold
a sense of finality,
            but where are you?




What did you think when you read that? What did you feel? Even if it was the most unintelligible scene or incomprehensible nonsense, tell me, please. I'd like to know.
answer me this.

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4 Comments
  • em wilder

    genius. i don't know. what is real?


    4 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    THIS is STUNNING wOW


    4 months ago
  • Dmoral

    aaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhh, stop breaking me apart, man, it's killing me slowly


    4 months ago
  • Bhavya's Treasure

    Your question compelled me to think who I am!
    I thought about soul and things and universe and God and the world beyond our imagination...
    Well, I'm not a real person...
    Is anything real in this world?
    Isn't it a big shocking illusion?
    Am I a person or that's again fragment of my imagination? P E R S O N I repeat the letters in my head and they make no sense, that is to say, nonsense... Being a person, is it nonsense? No.
    Finality, some say is death. But the same people say life exists after death.
    So, is there any finality to us? To our existence?
    Does it has any origin? It's a cycle, a cycle in which we're spiralling, spiralling in cosmogyral to escape one day from this cyclotron and what lies ahead, well, I don't know!

    Okay, so I ranted, since you asked me to. :)
    Does that make sense?


    4 months ago