Fabiana250

Peru

she/her

Message to Readers

Well, here's the second poem of this new phase of my life. And why new phase? Because when I wrote the first one, I had turned 16 like two days ago, so I thought it could be good to start all over again when it came to my writing and try to find inspiration in the current situations in my life. So feel free to leave any comments and reviews, I really appreciate that <3

it's always the same

January 5, 2021

FREE WRITING

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My brain says "don't fall"
but my heart says "go ahead",
whom should I listen to
if our friendship I don't want to break?

Joke after joke,
laugh after laugh,
I find myself trapped in your charm,
how much I wish we'd talk more.

You not replying to my texts
is a sign too.
No one's really too busy,
so if you'd like to talk to me,
you would.

The stars alligned so we could meet,
but that doesn't mean we are meant to be,
because sometimes, people are meant to come to your life
and then unexpectedly leave. 
 
[why does this always happen to me?]

-Fabiana
 
Based on a current situation...

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12 Comments
  • birthdaycandles

    Aww i get the internal conflict here- you display it very well! Lovely work


    15 days ago
  • wallflower

    I literally love this! You are so talented. I really hope you figure things out, but as someone who has been in this situation, don't fall you're so strong!


    16 days ago
  • bookmagic

    Imma take this chance to agree with your brain. DON'T FALL! Seriously, your stong.


    3 months ago
  • Starcatcher

    Ha, The story of my life.


    3 months ago
  • almost flora kane

    i so get this. actually wrote a piece on it myself, but i think you captured my situation much better lol:)


    3 months ago
  • V-Rose

    I love this. It captures so much, so well! It's amazingly written.

    But if you need to talk, I'm here.


    3 months ago
  • Emi (Revival Year #NEWYEAR)

    Aw, this is so sad. Stanza four is so beautiful and bittersweet. You capture these feelings so well.


    3 months ago
  • dream02

    Re: lol are we like soul sisters or something lol


    3 months ago
  • dream02

    Re: awwwwwww thank you so much. And yeah he said he likes me but didnt want to date and then said that he thinks I'm an "amazing person" but that he wants to make it clear that he'd rather just be friends.


    3 months ago
  • dream02

    Yasss, going through smth like this right now, really needed it.


    3 months ago
  • Charisse Marison

    Aw hon, I went through this too. Your piece was very beautiful and impactful, especially the line "the stars aligned so we could meet, but that doesn't mean we are meant to be." That part really hit me hard. If you need to talk to someone about what you're going through, I'm here <3


    3 months ago
  • Abigail Faith

    Aww! This is so good! I went through something like this, so it was very touching for me to read it. Beautiful!


    3 months ago