Peru
she/her
Well, here's the second poem of this new phase of my life. And why new phase? Because when I wrote the first one, I had turned 16 like two days ago, so I thought it could be good to start all over again when it came to my writing and try to find inspiration in the current situations in my life. So feel free to leave any comments and reviews, I really appreciate that <3
Written By: Fabiana250
January 5, 2021
FREE WRITING
12 Comments
birthdaycandles
Aww i get the internal conflict here- you display it very well! Lovely work
wallflower
I literally love this! You are so talented. I really hope you figure things out, but as someone who has been in this situation, don't fall you're so strong!
bookmagic
Imma take this chance to agree with your brain. DON'T FALL! Seriously, your stong.
Starcatcher
Ha, The story of my life.
almost flora kane
i so get this. actually wrote a piece on it myself, but i think you captured my situation much better lol:)
V-Rose
I love this. It captures so much, so well! It's amazingly written.
But if you need to talk, I'm here.
Emi (Revival Year #NEWYEAR)
Aw, this is so sad. Stanza four is so beautiful and bittersweet. You capture these feelings so well.
dream02
Re: lol are we like soul sisters or something lol
dream02
Re: awwwwwww thank you so much. And yeah he said he likes me but didnt want to date and then said that he thinks I'm an "amazing person" but that he wants to make it clear that he'd rather just be friends.
dream02
Yasss, going through smth like this right now, really needed it.
Charisse Marison
Aw hon, I went through this too. Your piece was very beautiful and impactful, especially the line "the stars aligned so we could meet, but that doesn't mean we are meant to be." That part really hit me hard. If you need to talk to someone about what you're going through, I'm here <3
Abigail Faith
Aww! This is so good! I went through something like this, so it was very touching for me to read it. Beautiful!