Below, you'll see any text that was highlighted with comments from the reviewer.
Message to Readers
Please review if you have any suggestions! I'm sorry that my sentences are all so long (it's a habit of mine). Also, don't hesitate to be critical with word choice and grammar. Thank you for reading, and have a nice rest of your week.
I love how nostalgic this piece is—it's clear that you truly miss this place. I especially love the fact that you zoom in from the largest picture (as if you're looking at a globe) and slowly shrink, and this helps to tie in to the ending about how you only get to look at it through Google Maps, since it's taken away from you.
Nostalgia (look above) and longing to return to "home." Your detailed descriptions of what you do in each place really help to make it seem like i'm standing there with you, in those places with you. Additionally your use of parallel structure just further emphasizes that (lol look at the comment in your last paragraph ;D)
well written, beautiful piece! my comments are just suggestions—don't feel obligated to take them! good job!!