moonlit orchestras & the asterism pleiades

[ she/her ] [ 16 ] [ slytherin ]

Message from Writer

be kinder to yourself and make choices for you.

slow dancing with the ghost of you.

October 21, 2020


 soft music swirls 
   in the chilly winter air /
 a gaunt figure upon a grave
swaying to the beats 
  from a present long forgotten /
his phantom hands cold 
  against warm, wooly mittens /
as clumsy feet stumble
  across empty stones /
 the markers of a past
    they only relived in dreams /
where their souls bound with hope
     and death was no friend.  /
wrote this really quickly so it's unedited, but i'd love to know what you guys think!


See History

Login or Signup to provide a comment.

  • Stone of Jade

    Oh my word your poetry and your writing is so amazing! You are so talented. Each piece i read is simple stunning and so captivating..also welcome to WTW (i know its been a bit but still gonna say hi) I'm Jade! If you have any questions font hesitate to ask!

    7 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    your writing is beautiful! I cannot wait to read more!

    7 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Ok bro this is so good. Like even it's so Beautiful I could actually feel your poem!

    7 months ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    Wow the poem is so PRETTYY "as clumsy feet stumble
    across empty stones /" :o

    7 months ago
  • mirkat

    I totally agree with mooncake! Love your writing! <3

    7 months ago
  • mooncake

    Wow this is insanely beautiful. Interested choice of season, fits really well into your piece.

    7 months ago