i never wanted aottsisfts to be romantic
Written By: Cosmogyral
October 21, 2020
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GRAAAAAAA THIS IS TOO WONDERFUL TO EXIST OR WRAP MY ARMS AROUND! You are beyond talented
This is hard...but it reminds me of a little boy who wished for a dream that was so big and wonderful, almost too good to be true, But then when all is said and done, it was really was too wonderful to be true, far too big even for a dreamer like himself. I love one liners that hit deep, so great job!
Re: incorporate it? uhm yeah, i'd love it. i already know that whatever you did with it i'd be obsessed
The line definitely reminds me of Howl when he swallows a star in Howls Moving Castle.
this reminds me of that scene in Howl's Moving Castle where Howl eat Calcifer, beautiful moment
my first thought: i need to translate XXXV to a number. how many beautiful poems have you written already? wow :0
anyways, the "don't" as a second line and ending felt super powerful. love love love it
woah... this is so good!!!! <33333
tbh the first thing i thought of was a toddler with like, neon yellow around his mouth and on his hands, looking guilty--as though he had just swallowed a star. But the emotion i get from this is so complex--wow, i love it!!! <333
oh my gosh.........this hit hard. i absolutely love this, the whole powerful, abstract one liner----so many vibes here i can't even process it. definitely one of my favorites out of this collection.
and makes me feel like i should share this snippet of mine (it's published in another writing place so that's why imma comment it here lol): "he just wanted to fall like the stars do; tell me, why don’t we make wishes on people too?"
I agree with mirkat, this seems like it could be applied to any situation the reader chooses. I like it though - you don't expect it.
Ooh, yay! This is one of your more elusive poems. I read it and I didn't know what to think. I've thought now, and now I'm starting to think this could be applied to any situation the reader chooses? I don't know.... still not sure. Wonderful job as always, though!
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