iamherbooks

Canada

soft
dreamer
storyteller

from brazil,
but canadian

"courage, dear heart"
-c.s. lewis

Message to Readers

Please, do correct my grammar and give me advice on how to improve my writing.

r e d h o o d

October 19, 2020

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A boy once broke me
Carved my starts out and left me in dust
Fighting back I learnt
How to claw at others
How to snarl at the unknown
That's how I came
To build up my walls

But when we found each other
I did not look away from you
I did not rip hope apart
My growl softened.
You showed me the Moon
Instead of a cave
You told me to Be
Instead of hiding
You braided my hair in Suns
Whispered to me I was made of stardust

That's how the Wolf
Came to love
The boy with the Red Hood

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6 Comments
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    I really like the imagery. I also like how you describe the girl as the Wolf and the boy as the Red Hood.


    7 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    Woah! The ending to this is so perfect and the whole "twist" (for lack of a better word) really fits!!


    7 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    Replying: Well, I guess I'm asking in general; like how do you like pieces here, the people, and the overall vibe? Love ya!! <3


    7 months ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    I love fairytales reimagined. this is incredible. i like the stylization of the title also!
    thanks for the comment and feedback! much appreciated, always.


    7 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    How are you so talented?!?!? Stunning!! Love this!! BTW, how do you like it here?


    7 months ago
  • ANSON REYNOLDS

    awww cute - I'm a sucker for retold fairytales, I'll admit it :) I would absolutely die if you made this a short story... PLEASE notify me if you ever end up doing anything else w this <333


    7 months ago