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Screaming & The Truth

November 10, 2020



Have you ever seen Death?

There is screaming
and clutching
and blood sometimes
and shadows walking into your being
and terror like nowhere else
and saying of
you can't make me let go

My soul fills up when I see it
with an awful dread and horror
with a fearful darkness
not for myself 
but for the people who don't know the Truth
Because the screaming is very loud
Because the hope is very far
Because the hope is already gone

Do you know the Truth?

The only One who conquered Death
Who came and 
held children and healed the blind and respected outcasts
Who came and sought out the 
oppressed and lost and brokenhearted
and saved them
and turned their deaths into portals
to everlasting peace

My soul fills up when I hear it
with a sense of splendor and awe
with the feeling of being deeply loved
and fully known
by the Prince of Peace
And my hope rests in him
and I wish each person's did
Because the screaming is very loud
Because the joy is endless 
Because Death will someday be never 

For God so loved the world that he sent his one only Son, that whoever believes in him will not die but have eternal life.
John 3:16


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  • Jesica Cojocea

    Oh my gosh! That’s so beautiful. Almost made me cry. It is so true, I rejoice at the fact that there is beauty beyond death which makes me long for Jesus even more. However, it makes me dread for those who do not know the truth, who find no point in life, nothing to live for. Keep writing, God has blessed you with a gift! Keep going sister!

    3 months ago
  • ~wildflower~

    This is wonderful! I love how you repeated some lines and the way that the last three lines show a change in perspective. I admire the courage you have to speak your truth and beliefs with such grace and conviction. Great work! <3 <3
    Also, thank you so so much for all of the comments you’ve left on my recent pieces. Your continual support means a lot to me!

    10 months ago
  • Jay Shortz

    This is AMAZING! Beautiful piece!

    10 months ago
  • Minvra

    This is beautiful.
    Re: Thank you.

    10 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    Replying- Totally!

    10 months ago
  • sci-Fi

    Re: tysm!

    10 months ago
  • lochnessie

    re: thanks! :)

    10 months ago
  • midnight.summerrose

    I absolutely love this! It’s beautiful!! :)
    Re: thanks :)

    10 months ago
  • midnight.summerrose

    Re: aww thank you so much!!

    10 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    Replying- Thank you! It's funny what happens when you're bored …also, it's nice to know I'm not alone. About John 3:16, have you heard of the Tim Tebow thing where he wore it under his eyes for a game and about 9.4 million people looked that verse up at the game, and then three years later, on the same date he played a game, and almost all the stats had the numbers 316? It was so cool :) sorry if that made absolutely no sense

    10 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: thank you!

    10 months ago
  • resident philocalist

    re: some are family names, some are book characters, and would i really be writer if i didnt spend hours on baby-name websites?? <3

    10 months ago
  • Jasmin khawar

    Re: thanks a lot! So sweet of you <3

    10 months ago
  • Lata.B

    I really love this poem you wrote! I love how truth was the one who conquered death. Hahah I'll be checking out more of your work!
    Re- omg same!! Hey! I hope you're having a wonderful day! :D

    10 months ago
  • amazing grace

    Sounds awesome, but sadly I live in Oklahoma so I would be able to go. :(

    10 months ago
  • amazing grace

    No I've never been. what is it?

    10 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    ahhh I love this
    re: aww thanks! Who ever said that being a teenager was fun? Coz it sure isn't XD I wish I was a cat. But thanks, Mellon!

    10 months ago
  • beth r.

    re: thanks for all the sweet comments!!

    11 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: <3

    11 months ago
  • Cosmogyral

    Re: Thank you for your comments, your support makes the writing will the worth. <3 I'm not familiar with the book, but I'll definitely look into it. :)

    11 months ago
  • Ibex

    First of all, this is epic. I love to see fellow Christians expressing their faith like this. Second, I just have to say that I absolutely love LOTR. Actually just started reading them for the third time again today... looking forward to an epic saga. :)

    11 months ago
  • Anna_19

    Wow. That's all i can say. Just...wow.

    11 months ago
  • Deleted User

    So beautiful! You have such a gift!!!
    Re: Thank you :D

    11 months ago
  • I. Connolly

    This is just so beautiful! Great job!

    11 months ago
  • Huba Huba

    This poem is beautiful! I like your writing style.

    11 months ago
  • Kate (Kit-Kat Sully) {Child of God}

    Replying: Thank you!
    Also, this is a really beautiful poem! :)

    11 months ago
  • mystifiedtulip

    Oh wow, this is enchanting. I love how you formatted everything, and the overall idea of this piece really stands out! Great job!!!

    re: tyy <3

    11 months ago
  • sophie_simile

    Wow, this is so beautiful!! Your work is amazing :) <3

    11 months ago
  • mirkat

    re: <3 <3 <3 sometimes people don't get it, but i'm glad you do. <3 <3 <3 keep writing!

    11 months ago
  • happygiggles

    Replying- I'm glad you found me too, new friends, yay!

    This piece is gorgeous, words can't even begin to explain it! I love it, I love it, I love it! ((:

    11 months ago
  • dream02

    Re: oh thanks! <3

    11 months ago
  • Livsnjutare

    O! I love this so much! It is so well written that I feel like it could be a Psalm! The One who conquered death, Prince of Peace. This is such a wonderful piece! John 3:16 is one of my favorite verses, thanks to AWANA (I am not sure if you know what that is).

    11 months ago
  • Abigail Faith

    Thanks! I wasn't sure, 'cause I didn't know if vaults are opened with keys! Lol! But I'm glad you think it fits!! Thanks!

    11 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    Very insightful, I find this a interesting topic, because I can feel the hope and peace mixed into the horror outline, great job!
    re- thanks for the follow, Francis Chan is pretty chill, I like how he makes you ponder hard questions. I love your quotes, I'm considering making a little book filled with them, we'll see:)

    11 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Thanks a billion!!

    11 months ago
  • Emi

    This is so heart-wrenching and powerful. It makes me feel sad, almost, and yet happy at the same time.
    Thanks for your comment by the way!

    11 months ago
  • beth r.

    This is amazing!
    re: awwww thank you >3

    11 months ago