Falling

18 Comments

• løne wølf
  

  short and sweet! perfect <3

  re: thank you so much for the well-wishes!

  
  
  11 months ago

• JustAnotherDarling
  

  Re: thank you....and thank you again :)
  yEs the guitar is really nice! (I'm so happy that someone other than me picked up on that) also, today I heard: Your Hand Is Safe In Mine by Blush... and it made me think of this poem again. (the song's a bit slow, so I don't know if you'll like it though)

  
  
  11 months ago

• mirkat
  

  Ooh, I love this! Simple yet sweet and very relatable.

  
  
  11 months ago

• Lata.B
  

  omg awwww this is so cute!!

  
  
  11 months ago

• Lata.B
  

  re- Thank you so much!! :)

  
  
  11 months ago

• Tayyaba
  

  MIND BLOWING<33

  
  
  11 months ago

• Tayyaba
  

  this is actually something you could tell ur loved one for the first time.<3<3

  
  
  11 months ago

• happy butterfly
  

  replying:aww thats so sweet of you.i've missed you too.i'm going to come back on here tonight to do some extensive catching up.:)

  
  
  11 months ago

• (sk)eyesofocher
  

  Awwwwww I love this this should be printed with a typewriter and framed;)

  
  
  11 months ago

• Huba Huba
  

  Thanks for complimenting! this piece is kind of funny, it seems like someone blackmailed you, and then the last sentence makes it all romantic. I could've sworn I followed you like a long time ago... welps I followed you anyway.

  
  
  11 months ago

• Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)
  

  XD XD XD XD!!!!!!! Well, it’s like “fuh” and “otter”. FUH-OTTER. But less emphasized. That’s what Anne said anyways!! I think it would be funny if it was pronounced in an unusual way. Like “f” (the letter; not the f sound” and “ter”. Pronounced like “Ef-ter”. Thsi is very hard to describe via writing! XD

  
  
  11 months ago

• Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)
  

  Beautiful, F’Otter (pronounced like the regular “f” sound +Otter, according to you WtW mom)! Great emotion!

  
  
  11 months ago

• Anne Blackwood
  

  Re: Thank you<3

  
  
  11 months ago

• don't you see the starlight (#TS)
  

  Re: yes yes yes! so glad you like KOTLC and Maximum Ride! i haven't found anyone who likes Maximum Ride actually except my grandma. so. i'm not sure that counts. even thoi feel like the books got sort of disjointed and plot-crazy, all the characters stayed true and were so lively and funny.
  i think you'll really like the Accelerati trilogy if you liked Maximum Ride, both faast paced and witty but Accelerati is more science-y. science-y kinda like how peter parker gets powers? like that, but slightly more believable, possible, and scary.

  
  
  11 months ago

• don't you see the starlight (#TS)
  

  don't hate me for that comment... i get carried away when it's books, writing, words, or aesthetic stuff. also, i realize a lot of those books sound feminine/tend toward girls, sorry about that, but they could be enjoyed by anyone. didn't mean to slant the description of the books towards anyone specifically either.

  
  
  11 months ago

• don't you see the starlight (#TS)
  

  this concept is classic, timeless (redundant? probably) and you nailed it.
  DID SOMEBODY SAY BOOK RECS?! *cackles wickedly and shoves an enormous comment stacked w/titles at you...* (copy+pasted this from other comment)
  I don’t know what you’re into, but for impactful l, deep and poignant: All the Light We Cannot See, Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close; for a rich and spellbinding novel on WWI, love, and Greek mythology: Lovely War; for a funny middle grade series, Percy Jackson, Storm Chaser, Keeper of the Lost Cities, Maximum Ride; for a dark, rich, enchanting high fantasy, the Caraval trilogy; for a classic, The Great Gatsby; for a fun YA, To All the Boys I Loved Before or The Cupcake Queen; for a tragic YA, The Fault in Our Stars; for a YA thriller and political and friend drama, Embassy Row trilogy; for a Victorian era comedy of manners where girls go to finishing school to become spies, Finishing School series; for a steampunk dystopian with impeccable world building and a prison that’s alive, Incarceron; for a series about books, Story Thieves or Inkheart; for a classic fiction series, Lord of the Rings, the Chronicles of Narnia, or A Wrinkle in Time; for a murder mystery-coming of age-romance-nature-adult novel, Where the Crawdads Sing; for a scandalous, twisting, glitzy dystopian trilogy, The Thousandth Floor; For a lively fairytale spin: Land of Stories, School for Good and Evil, Sisters Grimm; for a dark and breathtaking Cinderella spin, Stepsister; for an intriguing fantasy series, Magisterium; for a middle-grade, lighthearted modern fantasy, Children of the Red King (Charlie Bone); for a mind-melting, ingenious, hilarious urban sci-fi, The Accelerati Trilogy (highly recommend!); for a supernatural spin on a classic, Pride and Prejudice and Zombies; for a sparkling romance, royal drama, intrigue, strong female friendships, fiery redheads, and people who stand up for what's right, The Selection series; for just straight up brilliance, tears, laughter, and YA fun (some mature references, kind of like The Fault in Our Stars but not explicit), Hope and Other Punch Lines.

  
  
  11 months ago

• ~madeline~
  

  This is so simple but beautiful at the same time. I love it sooo much!!

  
  
  11 months ago

• mindfruit (semi-active)
  

  Aw, beautiful poetry as always F'Otter, especially those last two lines "And now I'm falling/For you."

  
  
  11 months ago