Ximena_24

United States

14
Her/she
Est. March 2019
Slytherin- District 12- Dauntless
ENFP
A living contradiction

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One day......I'm going to make the onions cry!

The hurt within

October 16, 2020

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You see me,
every day you look into my eyes
you look but you do not see,
the pain.
The hurt hidden by my smiles, 
the hate hidden by my laugh 
the emptiness hidden by my friends
the bruises hidden by my clothes.
You can look but you don't see
you say you care
but if you did wouldn't you have noticed by now, love?

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6 Comments
  • TwentyOneTimelords

    Short yet profound, and sad too! But I think a lot of people can resonate with it.


    11 months ago
  • TwentyOneTimelords

    Replying: Thank you so much for the comment and the reminder! It made me smile :)
    I hope your high school application process goes well!


    11 months ago
  • Ximena_24

    Thank You! It means a lot :)


    11 months ago
  • Abrianna

    "You can look but you don't see
    you say you care
    but if you did wouldn't you have noticed by now, love?"
    I really like the whole piece, this was awesome! <33


    11 months ago
  • Huba Huba

    Ah, this is short yet emotional. I love it.


    11 months ago
  • Livsnjutare

    This is great piece!!
    :D


    11 months ago