This is a really cool piece! I love the way you described the race (i know thats a very general comment) but it was done really well! I'm pretty new to WtW, so just trying to check out more peoples pages and get some feedback on my writing as well as give others feedback. Feel free to check out my page (if you want to) Your writing is really good! <3
Hey!! I just posted chapter 3 of "From the Diary Of..." if you are interested in checking it out :) Here's a link https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/197664/version/403251
ohhhh I feel this. I'm not a pro or anything, but swimming is my happy place and can only do it in the heat of the summer now. Stupid property manager.
Hey! I just release part 2 of "From The Diary Of..." If you want to check it out here's a link :) https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/197011/version/401505
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AmandaWritesRandolphTheRedNoesedSeaHorse(#holidayvibes)
This is a really cool piece! I love the way you described the race (i know thats a very general comment) but it was done really well! I'm pretty new to WtW, so just trying to check out more peoples pages and get some feedback on my writing as well as give others feedback. Feel free to check out my page (if you want to) Your writing is really good! <3
Rachaelgrace (hiatus) :)
Oooh this is really good! Great use of formatting and rythme.
Re: Thank you so much!
madeline3.14159
Hey!! I just posted chapter 3 of "From the Diary Of..." if you are interested in checking it out :) Here's a link https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/197664/version/403251
(sk)eyesofocher
ohhhh I feel this. I'm not a pro or anything, but swimming is my happy place and can only do it in the heat of the summer now. Stupid property manager.
dream02
And this piece is great btw! I'm a softball player and couldn't play this year so it's super relatable.
dream02
Re: aww thx!
madeline3.14159
Hey! I just release part 2 of "From The Diary Of..." If you want to check it out here's a link :) https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/197011/version/401505
Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)
Next part of Lost Letters of Panem is out! <3
https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/196870/version/401152
happy butterfly
replying: hey! i'm so happy you liked my piece. i am actually not a comperitive swimmer anymore.my favourite are probably freestyle or froggy!!
also i see you are quite new on here,if youever need anything don't be shy to come say hello<3<3
Rohan’s Defender
Re: aw thanks so much!!! I’m so glad! :D
Rohan’s Defender
Hi! Part 11 of the collab is out!
LunaWyvern
This is amazing! The imagery is so strong, I can FEEL the determination and desperation to win!
beth r.
great writing! i'm also a swimmer, but my pool is closed bc of covid soooo
re: ya i get you XD
NaiadIna
I admire people that can hold their breath for more than a few seconds underwater! My stamina could never. Re: thank you for your kind words!
Halopoet
Re: Thanks for the reassurance. You're very kind!
mystifiedtulip
Ahhh never related to anything more!!! XD I love how you really emphasized certain parts!!!
Re: tyyy <3
Anne Blackwood
Re: Thank you <3
Emi
I used to do swim team...you truly capture the feeling of racing through the water to the end of the lane!