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pocket poems

October 15, 2020

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"Nature’s first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf’s a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief,
So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay."

robert frost
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5 Comments
  • Kit-Kat Sully {Child of God}

    Thanks for telling me. I don't know why she is permanently suspended, but she is. I'll let you know if I hear more.


    7 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Replying: I believe you. Your friend explained it all to me. I hope you aren't suffering too much from all the hate that's being directed to you. Stay strong! You got this! <3


    7 months ago
  • Kit-Kat Sully {Child of God}

    Hi, may I ask what you commented on the piece I wrote about Savanna? My piece got censored, so I didn't get to see what you wrote.


    7 months ago
  • RemovedUser1

    This is really good! I love the rhyming. And how it starts with gold and ends with gold. It’s nice!
    Replying: Yes, those are the Ten Commandments. If you wanted to look them up in a Bible (or an online Bible) it would be Exodus 20:1-17. And if you wanted to get really into it, many people think the first one means you can’t make any images of Jesus, too. But sometimes that’s debatable.
    There’s no need to apologize! Everyone forgets them sometimes, XD! I had to memorize them one time, so that’s why I know them, XD.
    Have a nice day!


    7 months ago
  • lochnessie

    re: <33


    7 months ago