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If you have any advice please let me know!
I loved the details you added!! they were excellent!!! :)) Also, the way you slowly developed the character, but in a way as so not to lose the action--brilliant!
Hmm, I guess I'd want to know why the wolves didn't follow him. But really, I think this is complete as it is. Wonderful job!
I really loved seeing your first piece!! If you need anything more, drop a comment on one of my pieces. I'm happy to help! I really loved your story. I hope my comments are useful! :)