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I love your tone. It truly sounds like you're trying to convince the audience that they're good enough. Great job
I'm really lucky, there's not much bullying at my school. I myself have never been badly picked on, so this speech really made me feel what this experience could be like.
Well I talk a little more about this in the next box (down one), but really you just need to expand.
One main thing: the guidelines for this competition says that your speech has to be 600-1000 words long. Expand a little: WHY is each person worth it? WHAT could make them more confident in themselves? HOW can an individual stand up for themselves?
Hi! This is a great start, like an outline. Keep writing, and I'm looking forward to the final draft! And Welcome to WTW!