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I loved the mystery and magic behind this piece. It made me feel so joyous and happy and left me thinking...what if?
I would really like to know more about the people. How they interact with each other - families, neighbours, friends, etc.
I really enjoyed this piece and it was a refreshing change from descriptions of dilapidated, run-down and corupt cities.