lochnessie

Australia

she/her
flaming dragon protector of all minority groups, especially if sunny lets me borrow her sword
proud big sister <3

Message from Writer

fireful.

mon amie

October 13, 2020

FREE WRITING

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mon amie
je te manques plus
plus que mes sourires peuvent permettre
et après la tombée de la nuit
quand le ciel est bleu et rouge,
je vais demander - pourquoi?
pourquoi ils nous ont dit
ne regarde pas le soleil

le soleil est beau
et tu ne brilleras pas tout seul.

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my friend
i miss you more
more than my smiles can allow
and after nightfall
when the sky is blue and red,
i will ask - why?
why they told us
don't look at the sun

the sun is beautiful
and you will not shine alone.


 
i'm still learning french but i can hold a conversation :)
if you have corrections for my shoddy butchering of language, please let me know!

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5 Comments
  • rainandsonder

    ahh this is such a cute, lovely poem!


    7 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    re: that's so cool!! are you doing it through school? wow I'm so impressed!! :)


    7 months ago
  • crystalline•galaxies

    i don't understand french, but this piece is so adorable. it made me really smile.


    7 months ago
  • JustAnotherDarling

    this is SPECTACULAR!! (also i'm feeling so proud of me for being able to read the French, so thank you for making me feel sorta smart tonight :))


    7 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    woah I'm amazed!!! Im learning French right now, but I could only read one or two lines of the french version :(( well, its beautiful, in both languages!!! You're such an amazing writer <3 I love reading your poems!


    7 months ago