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Message to Readers
Please don't be too harsh on my story as this is my first published piece of writing. I hope you enjoy it and sorry if there are any spelling or grammar mistakes.
It's about a silly cat being killed to threaten the narrator and his/her mother.
You start in the middle of the action, making your readers want to know more and more about this world you've built and the characters in it.
I want to know why they have the cat, who's threatening them, what these people want, what their connection is to the small family, and how the family got mixed up with them in the first place. I want to see more of the child interacting with their mother and I want to see more of both character's personalities.
That being said, I know you started in the middle of the action of the story for a reason. You don't have to add in any of these things. These questions would need to be answered if you decide to continue the piece (which I highly recommend you do).
Don't be sorry about spelling and grammar mistakes: everyone inevitably makes them, no matter how hard we try.