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If you aren't a good writer now, practice and you will be.
Mistakes will come and go but don't dwell on them too much.

The Sun

October 11, 2020



             Scorching heat burns bodies
        In the summer, while the warming
      Sunlight is welcomed on a chilly day.
     Bright sunlight brings happiness and life.
  As the sun rises, people awake for the day.
 When the sun sets it brings darkness in the sky.
People fall asleep when the sun leaves the sky.
Some tan under the sun, laying on sandy towels.
 Others avoid the sun for it peels and reddens.
  It gives light to an otherwise dark world.
    Helps the plants grow, and the animals see.
       Covers the Earth like a cozy blanket.
            We live with the sunlight on us.
                We’re born with the hot sun,
                         And die with it.
Here's my shape poem i did for creative writing just imagine the rays of a sun around it :)


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  • CreativeAngel

    Aww Thank you both!
    I wasn't very fond or knew about shape poems but since it was an assignment I had to do it.

    3 days ago
  • Bookwitch

    Hi, I'm Bookwitch. This is an awesome shape poem. I just hope the sun doesn't get too hot.

    about 2 months ago
  • mindfruit

    Wow, neat piece! That's so cool that it's a shape poem, I've always been too scared or impatient to try writing one :)

    about 2 months ago