FantasyOtter12

United States

He/him
ISFJ-T
Scorpio
Love dystopian fiction!
Pianist
Bookworm
Abnegation
*Est. 7/6/20*
OtterFAMMM
Phlegmatic-Sanguine

Message from Writer

~Joined with best friends jztpenguin and mindfruit!!

~WtW adopted by ze amazing Anne Blackwood ^-^

~Son of Poseidon (Apparently. I guess it fits cuz...sea otters. Hm)

~ "A writer's job is to make the unclear clear and the clear unclear" ~mindfruit 2020

~ "orange also tastes like an orange" ~mindfruit 2021

~Hey, you should go find an otter. I hear they're adorable!

~Caramel iced milk with boba, lychee jelly, and less ice please
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~Music. hmm...-EDM-Lofi-Deep House-Ambient-Dubstep-

~I'm here but not really...resident ghost writer? XD

F4DING AWAY

October 17, 2020

FREE WRITING

21
I can feel the gritty remnants of before fading away

Never thought I would like a new beginning

But it feels like release, and something fresh.

Cranberry scented soap in the wintertime over a crackling fire

Because I didn't like them, now I don't have to talk to them.

I had it made, but I wasn't happy

I had no idea what to think, and now I don't have to think at all

Letting go the before

Facing the present

Looking into the future

And the best part is

You understand.

~FantasyOtter12

 
Hai. Poetry. Hm. Enjoy.

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14 Comments
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    Re: haha, okay thanks! :)


    7 months ago
  • chasing sunsets

    Wow!! The line "gritty remnants of before fading away" was absolutely perfect for drawing the reader in!


    7 months ago
  • lochnessie

    re: haha thanks :)


    7 months ago
  • JustAnotherDarling

    Re: LOL I think My Oasis is having it's one-day for me, today (my for-you-weekly playlist on spotify is refreshing tomorrow, so I'm hoping I'll find some new songs to love!)


    7 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    totally weird to point out but the way you said /Cranberry scented soap in the wintertime over a crackling fire/ really helps connect this poem to something relatable. it is that familiar sense that grabs the attention of a reader. such good poetry!


    7 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Re- yeaaa i should do that omg! Aw, thank you for your comment! Haha happy to back to this sweet community!


    7 months ago
  • Lata.B

    I love this! The describing words you used here is so PERFECT!!


    7 months ago
  • RemovedUser1

    Wow. I can FEEL this. Like something you thought you loved finally left and now you realize you are better off without it. Great, great job!


    7 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    beautiful :)


    7 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    Bam! Another great piece of poetry!


    7 months ago
  • JustAnotherDarling

    "But it feels like release, and something fresh. / Cranberry scented soap in the wintertime over a crackling fire" there's something magical about these lines and I don't quite understand What, but I am 200% sure it's there. and "gritty remnants of before" gave me GOOSEBUMPS. I'm just never going to be the same again. fine.
    Re: thank you! I've tasted the beauty of alliteration, and now I'm going to have trouble staying away :o


    7 months ago
  • Cornflower Burst

    Stupendous


    7 months ago
  • mindfruit (hiatus)

    Beautiful poetry. And to quote Anne, "LOVE LOVE LOVE"


    7 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    LOVE LOVE LOVE


    7 months ago