Cosmogyral

United States

i never wanted aottsisfts to be romantic

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

October 10, 2020

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THIS IS A COLLECTION OF POEMS UNDER A SINGLE TITLE



XXVII.
 I think it's time to find some gravity.


 
I don't think there's anything to imagine from a statement.

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6 Comments
  • Million dreams

    Re: Thank you for the title idea, I really appreciate it!


    5 months ago
  • RemovedUser1

    Whenever I think of gravity, I think of the gymnast who use gravity to make the spin and propel themselves higher than possible. They kinda need the gravity. Maybe we do too.
    That’s what I think, XD.


    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    re: huh, that's super interesting! I have written a few one-liners, but i usually play with the power of suggestion with them--like you do with your short poems. This is a very powerful line; and yes, i get less imagery but more feeling from this. Great job!!


    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    There is definitely imagination in a statement. In this, I get more feelings, maybe of betrayal or acceptance. Really beautiful, as always <3


    5 months ago
  • Wisp

    Replying: That's true. I guess you don't really think of imagination deriving from a statement. Also, I just wanted to say that this series is quite wonderful, I've enjoyed every single piece and they've been so magnificently written.


    5 months ago
  • Wisp

    On the contrary, a simple statement can be more imaginative than pages of words. Simplicity is sometimes best. And this statement sure packs a punch.


    5 months ago