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something i had to write for school (compare writing to an inanimate object). I chose trash XD
I love how casual this piece is. You're immediately introducing your thoughts to the reader with so much leeway and no hesitation.
What grade did you get on this? I've gotta know! I like how you subtly integrated real-world problems into this work, but be careful with the transitions to and fro', it's a little shaky.
I love this work, thanks for sharing it! I will now go forth and commit myself to mind-trash.