Cosmogyral

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i never wanted aottsisfts to be romantic

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

October 8, 2020

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THIS IS A COLLECTION OF POEMS UNDER A SINGLE TITLE


XXV. chasing clouds
and a moving castle
 life's a bore
so grab a basket
 and we'll see the stars.



What did you think when you read that? What did you see? Tell me, please, even if it was the breifest flash and most unintelligible scene, I'd like to know.
I feel like this one has the most beautiful transfomative scenery I've written in the past few poems of the collection.

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3 Comments
  • RemovedUser1

    It reminds me of children who play pretend. Combining different scenes from books and movies, doing the randomest things possible, but still being amazing.


    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    beautifullllllllllllllll <3 <3 <3 in this, i saw a hot-air balloon, the color of pearls, with two best friends leaning over the edge laughing. This is so enchanting <3 I love it!!!


    5 months ago
  • dream02

    I thought of a picnic, in London by a castle. Idk why lol


    5 months ago