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Message to Readers
In other words: Men. *eye roll*
I absolutely adored how you incorporated elements from Shakespeare's best known works, and how you used such archaic but beautiful language to discuss a very modern issue (men, yes, *rolls eyes*)! I cannot tell you how much I LOVE...THIS...IDEA.
When I say this poem is perfection, I'm not exaggerating. I really really enjoyed reading it (in fact, I read it several times). I wasn't confused by the archaic language, and I didn't miss any part of the message you wanted to convey. Everything was super crisp and clear, and the descriptions were g-o-r-g-e-o-u-s.
Keep up the amazing writing! I don't normally review poetry, but this poem was so fantastic I just had to tell you how much i loved it!! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧