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I found it interesting and, as someone in the 'next generation', the anguish expressed by the narrator is very relatable and close to home.
Not for clarity, but for deepening the piece, I think it would work well to include sections describing the setting and what is happening externally etc. alongside the thoughts. I think this would develop the voice a bit more and make it seem even more personal which, I believe, would enhance the message of the piece.
My favourite part was the last three paragraphs. I like the way the piece sort of turned into a poem at the end. I also liked the realisation that the narrator is watching this on a screen. Are they human or something else?