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without wings

October 7, 2020

FREE WRITING

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to be so deftly
unaware of the world now
is to 
be like a bird
without
wings
or a crab without a shell

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7 Comments
  • AbellePuppy34

    Good work! And thanks so much for all of the sweet comments you sent!


    7 months ago
  • acrosstheuniverse28

    Love the simplicity in this piece, and it's so true!


    7 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    re: just realized that i am the author of this story so i guess any of my headcanons are actually canon *face palm* XD


    7 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    re: hmmm...true. Eh it's a fantasy story so for the moment i don't think it will affect anyone too much. Headcanon...Sir Galvan is a royal...like a duke or something. that's why he's a knight/"Sir"


    7 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    Wow...this is beautiful and strangely moving.
    re: don't be so humble...of course i had to give you a shout out. You're are so encouraging and your feedback means a lot.
    Also sorry for all the links lol but I just posted part 3 of Unlikely Hero ;)
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/194832/version/395817
    (p.s. the griffin is my fav character too)


    7 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    WOAH this is gOOD. Wow. this is really amazing! I love this!!! <3


    7 months ago
  • rainydayz

    i adore this analogy. amazing work!


    7 months ago