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Peer Review please :)) Thanks!
I really like the intro!
It reminds me that there are people in this world that we can look up to as role models and want to become.
Maybe you could add a little more info on the issues that you want to address.
THIS WAS SO GOOD! Honestly, it was so inspiring and I really liked it! Keep writing about what you're passionate about, because this piece is amazing, and I think your views are worth fighting for!