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Tell me if any parts/paragraphs feel out of place or if I need to work on the flow of this speech.
That and any other comments (maybe reviews?) would be much appreciated <3
Well, first of all I love how you wrote a speech about speech. I think the title is what drew me in, very good title!
This speech talks about how people who express their ideas and opinions are silenced. It talks about how we should fix this and except people for their opinions. To tell the truth I’ve never heard a speech before about freedom of speech or whatever so I don’t know how it this shows the issue at a new light.
Personal stories? Why did you write about this? Have your opinions been silenced?
Great job on this! It’s very powerful and inspirational, I really like it. Great job and good luck!