~madeline~

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euphoria fashioned from stanzas of

disillusionment

est. 8.19.20

Message to Readers

Sorry I haven't been responding to comments and stuff.
Schools been a little hectic. hopefully tommorow I'll have a little more time to write and review... :)

Music Out Of Words(Title Suggestions?)

October 8, 2020

FREE WRITING

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How do you form your music out of words?
Somehow you can make this artwork heard.
How do you paint a portrait with your voice?
Your language brings out all my deepest joys. 

How can I build some beauty from my mind?
My syllables turn muddied on the line. 
What can I do to make my design shine?
I cannot strike the chord that binds the rhyme. 

How do you make your work flow smoothly on?
Each sentence works in time with setting sun. 
Then marks the sky with colors of the dawn. 
You words glide ever smoothly as a swan. 

Why is my music always so discordant? 
In your ears does the same language ring foreign? 
Do you find my mental maladies coherent? 
Or are the selfsame blemishes apparent?

So I struggle through the world of art. 
Picking every piece I see apart. 
Comparing with the ones I know by heart. 
Can I give my image a new start? 
 

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20 Comments
  • queenie

    re: aaaahh you picked up on my message box thinggggg-


    7 months ago
  • ~Zoe N~

    Re: Ha, if you have any questions I'm here. Part 3 coming tomorrow :)


    7 months ago
  • queenie

    Part 8 got taken down :(


    7 months ago
  • Lata.B

    I love how the questions in this poem fit so well! aw, I love this!
    Re- that is such a sweet thing to do! I had never heard that before but ill be sure to do that next time I go out to eat! That's just so sweet! Thank you for your advice! I will be sure to add that in and it's so true tho... we take so many things for granted.


    7 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Next part of The Lost Letters of Panem is out now!


    7 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: awesome! Thank you so much!! XD Yes, Peeta and I get along so well!! XD That’s so sweet! And so cool that you have that type too! Yes, I’ve always been decently tall. Thank you so much! :)


    7 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Part 9 of the collab is out!


    7 months ago
  • Turkeycracker K (a.ka. Firecracker)

    So cool!


    7 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Lovely! <3

    Perhaps 'My Voice Is A Paintbrush'?
    'The Tune of artistic voices?'

    I'm really bad at titles myself xD


    7 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Part 8 of collab is out! <3


    7 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Part 7 of the collab is out!


    7 months ago
  • Emi

    This is so beautiful The partial rhymes actually sound musical! You could probably actually make a song out of this.


    7 months ago
  • RemovedUser1

    This is BEAUTIFUL! You had my thinking that you were really bad at poetry, but this is great!! Amazing! I love the concept. Hmmm. For the title... how about Artwork Heard?


    7 months ago
  • RemovedUser1

    Replying: Yeah, it’s interesting to see other people’s opinions :).
    It would be scary at first, at least for me. But that’s funny! I’ve always got the “yeah, you must be homeschooled because you’re smart,” reaction, XD. I go to a co-op, which is where homeschoolers get together to learn. I’m taking an Anatomy class. Will you be able to go back to school soon? I’m in 9th grade; I skipped 8th grade :). Sophomore is... the third year, right?
    And, yes! A WtW prom would be so fun! Hey, Admins! Are you listening, XD?


    7 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    if you wanna see more of my art i share some on insta @lexi_slyman


    7 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    re: Oops totally skipped that art question. I love all types of art. Traditional sketches, alcohol markers, watercolor...but I've been recently getting better at digital art. That's what I do for my profile pictures. I work on photoshop. What art do you like? And pfft im sure your not awful. practice makes perfect!


    7 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    oh wow this is gorgeous!
    re: I never watched the PJO movies. I skimmed the first one--and I mean skimmed. I think i prob watched a total of twenty minutes skipped thru and that was enough for me to realize just how awful it was.
    OOH that makes me excited to finish the books now! I've never read them before!
    YES! LOKI!! I loved Endgame--and its embarrassing (kinda) to say I cried so hard in the theaters. I totally get what you mean bout sad movies. A favorite (just watched it tonight actually) is The Help. I cry every time. The book is AMAZING! Would def recommend.
    Aww lucky! It's too cold here to sit outside but I can see the moon and mars and its so clear! Fall is one of my fav seasons but i love summer because i can sit out on our deck late into the night. fav memory of the summer--watching the sunset from a friend (crush's) roof.


    7 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: Y. E. S. YESSS WE CAN ALL DREAM AND JUST YESSSSSS!!!


    7 months ago
  • CAT with a SOWRD

    I love this! I love how you use AABB poetry
    And I like the title


    7 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Beautiful!
    Replying: Thank you! You're amazing, too! <3


    7 months ago