FantasyOtter12

United States

He/him
ISFJ-T
Scorpio
Love dystopian fiction!
Pianist
Bookworm
Abnegation
*Est. 7/6/20*
OtterFAMMM
Phlegmatic-Sanguine

~Son of Poseidon (Apparently. I guess it fits cuz...sea otters. Hm)

Message to Readers

~Thx to Spade for catching the error in the second line from before heh
~Anyone want a review for the speech comp...??

A Haiku Cuz Why Not

October 9, 2020

FREE WRITING

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This storm is quite big

My umbrella is quite small

I then start to bawl

~FantasyOtter12
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16 Comments
  • Lata.B

    This is so cute!


    about 1 month ago
  • Anlee

    you're a genius haha this is adorable and sad at the same time <3 such a unique haiku


    5 months ago
  • sunny.v

    re: that's so kind of you to say! hope you're well <3


    5 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: It's a little itchy and obvious, but I'm learning to deal with it. At least it's easy to operate.


    5 months ago
  • JustAnotherDarling

    Ahhh that makes sense - though, whenever I need background music, I tend to gravitate toward piano music :)


    5 months ago
  • ChocolateKiwi

    Re: Thank you so much!


    5 months ago
  • Syzygy (#words) (J.A.M)

    Re: xD Glad to be of service :)


    5 months ago
  • ava09 (sorta back)

    same fam same


    5 months ago
  • JustAnotherDarling

    Listening to Summer Days rn... I think it's my favorite of all four! View is a happy, feel-good song - It just didn't click with me as much as To the Wire did. And Call Away has SUCH A CHILL BEAT I LOVEEE... overall, I get kind of a cluby vibe from your songs...it's great for a friday :D
    I think you might like "Hope" by Tom Legend and Naomi Wild, but idk for sure


    5 months ago
  • JustAnotherDarling

    It's raining where I live today - made me feel like this haiku came even more to life because of that, idk.
    Re: wow. I didn't drink my morning coffee today, but I also haven't yawned once, and I think it's because I've had "To the Wire" on repeat all day XD
    happy friday!


    5 months ago
  • that one rat from ratatouille

    I always enjoy reading your poems. Whether they are sad or happy or funny, they make me smile.


    5 months ago
  • AbellePuppy34

    This is really sad (I mean that in a good way, because you conveyed your feelings so well!) but also really creative and smart. Very well written piece!


    5 months ago
  • Deleted User

    I don't know why, but this is hilarious! XD


    5 months ago
  • beth r.

    great work!


    5 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Wow! Every piece of yours is so good, even the short ones.


    5 months ago
  • SherlockRlz

    This is amazing XD


    5 months ago