~Zoe N~

United States

Kindness is choosing love over hate, light over darkness, and compassion over judgment.



Message from Writer

"The most beautiful stories always begin with wreckage."
-Jack London


Go check out the work of my WtW twin sister madeline3.14159

I'm losing control

November 10, 2020


I don't know what you are,
but you control me.
An inner creature,
twisting me,
controlling me,
forcing the words 
from my mouth.
I don't know what you are,
but I'm losing control,
I can't think,
only your voice echoes
through my head.  

You have to listen to me.
I know what's best,
don't listen to anyone else.
I know you best.
I losing control,
and time is running out.
You're like a puppet master,
and I am the puppet.
You control me,
and time is running out.


See History
  • November 10, 2020 - 12:46pm (Now Viewing)

Login or Signup to provide a comment.

1 Comment
  • Syzygy (#words) (J.A.M)

    Re: I don't think that there's an age limit, but internet says 15+ I read it a while back because a teacher suggested it. If you're queasy with drinking, violence, etc. it's probably not for you. I'd look it up, and read what it's about, and do some digging if you want some more info. The girl on a train is really, really good.

    5 months ago