Hello! This is a small poem I've been working on and would love some peer reviews please. Happy Autumn : )
Written By: LilyMelton
October 4, 2020
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My favorite CS Lewis... mmm... well, I LOVE Chronicles of Narnia, especially Dawn Treader and Silver Chair. Ooh, and I'm going to read The Screwtape Letters which is exciting! Two random things: uno- I'm hanging out in the U.S., and I've noticed the spelling of your words and it makes me smile- I will always spell "gray" "grey" :) dos- you should post something!!! Your writing is fabulous, and I want m o r e...........
Emi (Revival Year #NEWYEAR)
This literally captures the beauty of autumn. I love how descriptive it is! I hope to see more of your work here!
Wow! I loved the imagery in this piece!
Oh (I totally forgot to put this in my comment, oops :)) and I LOVE C.S. Lewis!! I saw your quote and it made me so happy. Lewis is SO QUOTABLE- seriously, "You can never get a cup of tea large enough or a book long enough to suit me." RElatable much? XD What's your favorite one of his books?
you made me miss autumn so much :'(
I love the line about pumpkin spice chasing cinnamon- asbhjlchadvh so good <3 :)
omg this just gave me little fall sparks of happiness! you imagery is so amazing it really made me feel that cozy vibe ahahahaha
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