Huba Huba

United States

Writer, poet, musician, wanna-be-botanist.
Sleep deprived.
Call me a monster, I put milk in before the cereal.
I'm probably eating ramen right now or having a mental breakdown.
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Joined: May 26, 2020

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A Busy City

October 3, 2020

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There's a busy city inside my head
The left side controls the right side 
The right side controls the left side
Traffic lights go green then red 

Someone crashes into a car
Or does the car crash into someone? 
A woman staggers on her way to work in heels, 
A man is stuck in traffic, because there was an accident. 

There are people sitting on the sides of the roads with a cup in their hand,
Others walk by pretending they're invisible. 
Some are barely covered enough for the weather, 
Some are stepping on pricey pieces of fabric. 

There's a busy city inside my head
The right controls the left side 
The left side controls the right side
Traffics go red then green 

I have a headache, leave me alone. 

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7 Comments
  • Stone of Jade

    re: aw thank you for your comment and follow :) ima check out some of your work rn!!


    11 months ago
  • Diana Cojocea

    Love the ending reveal! I can really relate to this. This is awesome! Keep writing!


    11 months ago
  • crystalline•galaxies

    thanks so much for commenting! it made me really happy. your writing is also amazing!


    12 months ago
  • Jason_claire :)

    I can relate so well...sometimes it's just gotta be crapped up like that
    re- ha ha ligit yes


    12 months ago
  • Emi

    This is such a cool piece! I love how you describe the brain this way; it's really unique and lovely description.


    12 months ago
  • JustAnotherDarling

    This is so well-written :)
    (reminds me of a piece I wrote: The Show Must Go On - it's also about how life just rushes by and we never really stop to absorb it all)
    Re: thank you!


    12 months ago
  • rainydayz

    i adore this concept! it’s very thought provoking. also i love how you ended it with the line about the headache and the repetition of the first stanza. it makes for a wonderful closing.
    re: thanks so much for the kind comment!


    12 months ago