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The title is so strikings, and I love the imagery of the first stanza, it immediately caught my attention. I love how I can imagine myself as the author here on.
Is this sleep paralysis, Anxiety, Insomnia? It's amazing how well you allow your poem to progress. I love the AABB format you use.
It's beautiful, really, thank you for sharing. I look forward to your next work.