FantasyOtter12

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~Son of Poseidon (Apparently. I guess it fits cuz...sea otters. Hm)

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~Thanks to musicmaker for the word 'Harpsichord' to start this piece :)

~Sry if I didn't pick the word you dropped in the comments I just loved harpsichord so much I decided to give it a try :)

Rhymes With 'Harpsichord'

October 2, 2020

FREE WRITING

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There was that day where I was playing the harpsichord

I had my phone on record

And was hoping to win an award

The thing is, not even one person liked it; not even the landlord.

My instrument shook all the floorboards

And I started to get ignored.

So I cut the chord

Which I had adored

And from then on I played no more harpsichord
 

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21 Comments
  • Busssy.Beee

    YESS!!! I LOVE THESE POEMS SO MUCH!!
    re: OMC! really? that's actually really cool. I guess mindfruit just gets to meet people irl. XD But, yeah, I was at Valentine with him for 4 years, and every year he would play basketball in the same court. You must know how he looks like recently, I only have his young pics.


    3 months ago
  • Deleted User

    This is so cool! I love the way it's written! By far my favorite in your little series... Unless you surprise me!


    4 months ago
  • em wilder

    wow.... this works! how did these words come to you!?


    4 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    Hey! Chapter 13 for Traitors and Rebels is out!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/free_writing/193737/versions/393871


    5 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    May I suggest a few words?

    Needle
    Audacity
    Uncharacteristic
    Appalled
    Bounding
    Hilarious


    5 months ago
  • JustAnotherDarling

    Re: LOL maybe you're right... you too :D


    5 months ago
  • JustAnotherDarling

    this is a lil short story in itself and sad but so cute (I must be evil to find a sad story cute - oops) and WOW I truly never thought about how many words rhyme with "harpsichord" until now!
    Re: It's halfway through Saturday as I write this, but THANK YOU! I was all caught up in my emotions, but I guess something good came out of it too :) as for songs...my song of the day is "Meet Me in Amsterdam" by RINI (SO GOOD!!)
    I hope you're having a happy Saturday <3


    5 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Thanks buddy <3


    5 months ago
  • happygiggles

    replying- Thanks for your comment! You can come see my stand up comedian show at 7pm on...-nah just kidding I ain't that funny? Or am I? I'm sorry if you didn't get that, it sounded funnier in my head than it does typed out, now im starting to understand why people don't get my humour lol

    Aside from my failed attempt at sarcastic humour, this piece is amazing! I can sense the innocence yet maturity that comes near the end along with the realization. Bravo!


    5 months ago
  • Spade

    This is...EPIC! Maybe you should try xebec. Or acrid...


    5 months ago
  • RemovedUser1

    Haha!! When I saw the title I was like “This is gonna be so hard, XD.” But this is great, and I’ve literally never heard of this before, XD. Can J make a suggestion? How about..... Debt? I don’t know, XD. Maybe.... Oxymoron? XDDDDDD. Yeahhhhh.....


    5 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    HAHAHHAHAH!!! Nice one!


    5 months ago
  • Nathaniel G. Williams

    I CHALLENGE YOU TO DO ONE WITH ORANGE. THERE IS AT LEAST ONE WORD THAT RYHMES WITH ORANGE. DO IT.


    5 months ago
  • If you died right now, where would you go? (Kit-Kat Sully)

    Love the rhymes! Great piece! :)


    5 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    also..i know ive said it before but these are so fun to read! maybe...just a suggestion...try a seasonal one? Like October? or fall? apple? pumpkin? haha can you tell I like this season XD


    5 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    Chapter 12 of Traitors and Rebels is out!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/177526/version/393877


    5 months ago
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    Adorable! XD


    5 months ago
  • Cici'sTimes

    *opens the dictionary... and your lottery word is 'whammy'


    5 months ago
  • ~Zoe N~

    Nice! My word suggestion is numb. Kinda weird but it's the first thing I could think of...


    5 months ago
  • Cosmogyral

    Have I mentioned how much these make me smile?
    You should try 'Copenhagen', lmao


    5 months ago
  • madeline3.14159

    Another great one!!! Love it!! Try rhyming with governor...


    5 months ago