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Go check out the work of my WtW twin sister madeline3.14159
Written By: ~Zoe N~
November 10, 2020
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19 Comments
Rose A
Wow, this is good! I'm literally going woah.
And since we haven't met yet: Hi, I'm Rose!
midnight.summerrose
Re: I’m not allowed to give out my details, sorry but I’d be happy to just communicate on here though! :)
midnight.summerrose
Oh my days!! Another amazing piece of writing!! I don’t know how you are so good!! Everything is so perfect and beautiful!! :)
Lata.B
Bro this is so good!!! Like amazing!!!
Re- You should!!!! It's so fun!! If you do, tell me!!
em wilder
i love this... so relatable. the metaphors especially. it's beautiful. and i get the trying to please or cleansing or imperfectness and false lies and just all of it. it's very deep and emotional. <3<3<3
???
Woah. This is so... WOW
Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)
BEAUTIFUL!
Also, this is the link to my second draft in case you want to look at it! <3
https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/194387/version/395909
dream02
Why is it that the fake people are called perfect. The ones who are the most imperfect.
tas (yellowbrickrd)
Re: Thank you so much for your kind comments ! Also this is amazing. :0
abby.a
woahhhhhhhhh.... wow... wowowow....
lochnessie
re: :)))
buddingauthor
Woah, you took an everyday activity and made it so deep and meaningful!! Its really beautiful!
Rachaelgrace (hiatus) :)
This is so good! Nice writing Zoe!
Bhavya's Treasure
You took such a mundane thing and strung it into a metaphor! Indeed the smell is so sugary and fruity but yet it's toxic. Wow!
I think in the last line of first stanza it should be 'hidden beneath'
Correct me if I'm wrong. :)
waxingcrescents
I love the inner conflict that drives this piece forwards. It has a gritty, raw tone that's so captivating. Your voice is so powerful here. Wow.
V-Rose
Re: Thanks for your awesome comment. I don't think I'll do a part two or book of Cat Fight yet but I'll let you know if I do. I'm already working on three stories. Maybe after I finish one or two of those.
Rohan’s Defender
Re: aww thanks!
Anne Blackwood
Great use of an extended metaphor in this piece!
Anne Blackwood
Re: <3