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~it is during our
darkest moments
that we must focus
to see the light~
aristotle

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"i am a stick"

est. 8.19.20

Message to Readers

More random ramblings. Honestly I should just start a random ramblings series. XD Thanks to Lydia Ledy for the title!! Any more suggestions?

When It All Comes Down To This.

October 2, 2020

FREE WRITING

16
I want to speak
but the words
jumble on
the way
out of
my
m
o
u
t
h

I want to sing 
but it seems
discordant
with no 
key or
tune
to
p
l
a
y

I want to change
the world or
maybe just
myself
but 
it 
w
o
n
't


Because I am small
and the world is
just so huge
and I can't
make 
any
d
i
f
f
e
r
e
n
c
e



So I scream and cry
and shout and
try to make
a change
until I 
can't 
c
o
n
t
i
n
u
e
 

And then I realize.

The world is a huge place
composed of smaller
places that are 
defined by 
smallest
people
living
in 
t
h
e
m

I change the small places
and the small places
change others and
the world is
defined
by 
m
e

You change
the world
and so
do 
I








 

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6 Comments
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    WOW. AMAZING!!!! XD


    5 months ago
  • Chloe :) <3

    I read this piece and it really made me feel something. Also if you have the time, could you just give this a read - I just want to feel like I wasn't crazy for writing it I guess. https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/193954/version/393815


    5 months ago
  • ~wildflower~

    Beautiful!! A lovely and true message, and the formatting is just marvellous!


    5 months ago
  • Livsnjutare (#words)

    This is really good!!!

    Just to let you know I posted a new piece today, can you please review it??
    Here is the link,
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/193908/version/393727


    5 months ago
  • Deleted User

    *thumbs up* :)


    5 months ago
  • Deleted User

    Title ideas:
    1. Defining Change
    2. When It All Comes Down To This
    3. Small Is Good
    4. Changing the World Isn't(is) Hard
    5. You Change the World And So Do I
    6. Alteration, Difference, Remaking, Change

    Any of these work for you? I don't know if they're any good, but when I read your thing these were just what I felt. Good luck!(Also, no matter the title it is really good. I love it!!)


    5 months ago