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Message to Readers
Wrote a couple of 99-word stories.
If I get a good response on this, I might publish more.
Thanks for reading!
I really liked the concept of this story, and I love how you managed to convey such a moving plot in just 99 words! I also really loved the title--it definitely captured the essence of the story and immediately caught my attention.
I know this a 99-word story, but I think it would be awesome if you could build on your descriptions a little more. I don't want to be too nitpicky, but I've noticed you have some minor grammatical errors. To help with that, I suggest not bothering with grammar while writing your first draft, and then reading your piece aloud several times to see if any sentences sound funny. I tend to spot little grammatical errors that I missed while writing when I do this trick, and I hope you find it helpful!
Keep up the awesome writing! I'd love to see more 99-word stories from you. ^-^