Fernweh

India

messed up dreams in my mind
charred, black soul in my body
catastrophic symphonies in my heart

always missing you guys -
Quille
Ryder

little sis to - Bhavya's Treasure

Message to Readers

Wrote a couple of 99-word stories.
If I get a good response on this, I might publish more.
Thanks for reading!

When Existence Ceases, Only Memories Survive

December 15, 2020

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"Who are you?”

The wheelchair-bound man questioned. Her smile threatened to escape but she held on to it. “I’m sorry. I mistook you for my father.” Stinging words unwillingly left her parched-lips. He smiles, recalling her of her childhood.

The same smile which cheered her up then; pained her now. 

"Maybe I can help you find him?” Tears filled her eyes, kindling her grief further.

“You won't be able to find him. I'll never be able to find him again.” She whispered, her throat tightening as she walked past him, holding onto her only souvenir of him; her memories.
99 words.

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5 Comments

  • beth r.

    omygod wow
    re: thanks! hope you get to prom one day :)


    4 months ago

  • Bhavya's Treasure

    Re: When I was in your shoes even I used to think that such things are tough but if you work hard then it will be a piece of cake! :)
    Yeah, make your mom happy then. XD Nice sentence (I like to believe....)
    Well, I believe God is the energy which is driving this world and a part of that energy abides in each one of us. The day that energy exits us, we die! But that's just what I feel.

    Sure, I'll do that one then. :)

    Oh wow, thanks for the offer. I know you must be occupied with Rotation and Equilibrium these days but still if you think you can take out some drops of time from your pot then it will be a treat for me! :D

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/178418/version/361810

    Hoping to receive some Constructive Criticism from my little sister! :D Thanks again!

    PS: Pardon me, the review might take some time.


    4 months ago

  • Stone of Jade

    oh wow! I love these!! I'd love to read more 99/word stories! they are so captivating in a "i-wanna-read-more-but-dont-need-to type of way


    4 months ago

  • Bhavya's Treasure

    Oh my!! It's a heart breakingly beautiful flash fiction Fernweh!
    'Her smile threatened to escape' great choice of words.
    And the title goes so well. :)
    Yes, definitely you should publish more.
    How you been these days? I hope you're done with your mid-term exams. :)


    4 months ago

  • SunV

    This is so heart touching!


    4 months ago