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Any feedback you have would be great!
I really loved the concept of an abandoned house that has more to it than just a creepy exterior, and a hint of what happened in the past. I also loved how you bounced dialogue between two characters: Scarlett, who's curious and excited to explore, and Liam, who's not as enthusiastic.
I loved your descriptions of the house and its rooms, and it would be awesome if you could further expand your descriptions to make them even more vivid. I also feel that the house's history could be explored further--maybe you could write a follow-up story where Liam and Scarlett go around asking neighbors about the house and reading old newspapers--basically up to more exploration and mischief! You don't have to take my suggestions though--feel free to do whatever you want with this story!
I really loved this story, and I'm excited to read more from you! Keep up the awesome writing. :D