KBridget

United States

-16 years old
-Pansexual/Poly
-They/Them
-My life is just one big panic attack
-Real name is Kayla

Message from Writer

"When you make the effort to speak someone else's language, even if it's just basic phrases here and there, you are saying to them, 'I understand that you have a culture and identity that exists beyond me. I see you as a human being” -Trevor Noah

"One page of the Bible isn't worth a life" -Wrabel

"If your religion requires you to hate someone; you need a new religion.”- Ricky Gervais

"Remember kids, if you don't sin, Jesus died for nothing." - also Ricky Gervais

“Throw me to the wolves and I will return leading the pack.” -Suzanne Collins

I Hold The Sun In My Hands||Review for Review

October 5, 2020

FREE WRITING

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As I wake up each morning
I hold unrelenting darkness in my mind

My heart, filled with exhaust
Beats anxiety through my veins

Loneliness fills my stomach so
I have no space for breakfast

Glaring, hating eyes
They burn holes through my back

With each unwanted breath
I inhale sadness like the sweetest aroma

Each insult and unkind word
None affect me, I've thought them all about myself

My brain is a cruel place to be alone
It tosses me around and slams me down when i'm already at my lowest

But as each though in my mind, beat of my heart,
expand of my lungs, growl of my stomach,
insult and hateful word attack me.

I know I will be okay in the end.
Because I, a beautiful creature, I hold the sun in my hands
 
I don't write poems, so this is my first one. Please excuse me if it's not very good.

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8 Comments
  • ~The Rain Glows Too~

    I think it’s a very good poem. I really like how you touch on a different quality/emotion in each stanza


    5 months ago
  • AliMuscles04

    That was soo beautiful! Poetry isnt really my thing, but I like this so so much!!


    5 months ago
  • Hanadee Cone

    I left a review. but wanted to say aain how amazing this was. i wrote a piece called " voice" i think you might like it if you read it.


    5 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: You're welcome.
    And I see, thanks for the clarification.


    5 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    This is so lovely. And strong. Wonderful work here.

    ...and for the record, Jesus taught to love everyone. Period. Us humans just screw that up a lot.


    5 months ago
  • ~Zoe N~

    Love this!


    5 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    a review is coming your way!


    5 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    It's so pretty, Mellon!


    5 months ago