Cosmogyral

United States

i never wanted aottsisfts to be romantic

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

September 26, 2020

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THIS IS A COLLECTION OF POEMS UNDER A SINGLE TITLE


 XVI. the sky bleeds crimson,
the moon - she has abandoned us.
it is clear this is no longer fun
for there are no stars to be seen.

So, what did you think when you read that. Even if it was the most unintelligible scen that flashed across your mind, I'd like to know.
i keep nitpicking this, sotty, lol

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3 Comments
  • Anna_19

    I imagine a little girl, as the moon, getting kidnapped or something. She's the light of everyone's life, and then she's gone. Thank you, even though it made me think of something different then the other one. Kepp writing these poems, their cool!


    5 months ago
  • queenie

    this made me think of “Watership Down” right away. Nice use of personification when describing the moon. I really liked that.


    5 months ago
  • hi i'm jackson ;)

    ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhh interesting.....i like it


    5 months ago