Samina

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i have tasted pain

November 4, 2020

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ending the meal of the day with bitter painful dish
dipping my hand into sea of lachrymal
wrinkled & pickled just like they are after washing dishes 
touching the tip of my tongue with sorrow dip hands
with effervescence bouncing on my tongue
taste buds recognize the pain
pain is tongue's ex who it couldn't get over   
slowly gulping down my throat
it always numb
didn't pour a word
but now
bitterness quenching the thirst
i have tasted the stars and the rainbow
yet scarlet pain is glued on the tongue
can't get rid of it 
word count 83
date published 24-9-2020

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8 Comments
  • sci-Fi

    Re: Thanks! I added Dmoral's piece in my message from writer


    2 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Hey, so I saw that you commented on my piece Bidwell Academy, but I deleted that version and wasn't able to see your comment. Would you be willing to comment on the new version?


    2 months ago
  • ByFarStories

    I just learned a new word: "effervescence ", thank you! Very descriptive!


    2 months ago
  • Sanjana Sunilkumar

    Totally agreed with Charisse Marison XD


    2 months ago
  • Charisse Marison

    Your vocabulary is bigger than my entire brain XD
    So gorgeous! Love it!


    2 months ago
  • Currently Unavailable

    Wow! Love this!


    2 months ago
  • Just_Those_Christmas_Memories (#Holidayvibes)

    Girl, some of these words are freaking HUGE! Amazing! Love it! <3


    2 months ago
  • Samina

    please teach me the use of the word lachrymal XD


    2 months ago