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Message to Readers
Please tell me what your thoughts are on this. Any form of advice and criticism is welcome. Thanks!
Communication of sweet sorrow.
Do you believe in reincarnation? Are you saying life is suffocating? I feel like, in real life, this would be a beautiful example of a day in life, how something dies within yourself that others couldn't comprehend.
It's an incredibly powerful piece, the change of smiling to not life an evergreen in the desert is amazing. I'm stunned by the smooth transition you play in this. You're doing great <3