beth r.

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... just your average teenage writer

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burnt tongues and betrayed souls

September 21, 2020

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How dare you.
How dare you?
You had one job. To eat the ramen. That's all. But no. You just decide to be weak, to burn. You leave me here, with no taste and blinding pain. All because you can't handle a little heat?
As I chug the milk, I have a heavy heart.
You betrayed me, tongue.

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10 Comments

  • Rachaelgrace (hiatus) :)

    Your writing is always so funny, clever and AWESOME!


    5 months ago

  • FantasyOtter12

    Omg @Coolgirl2020 I had the EXACT same reaction XD AMaaazing piece Beth!!


    5 months ago

  • AbellePuppy34

    I really don't know how you are able to write so much comedy, and it's always good! Just so you know, when I need a laugh, I look at your feed.


    5 months ago

  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! You almost made me burst out laughing while the teacher was lecturing! XD THIS CRACKED ME UP, HOW DO YOU DO THIS! THE BETRAYAL IS REAAAAAL! TRAITOR!! XD


    5 months ago

  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: awww, hi!!!!! He’s so cute, Beth!!! :D


    5 months ago

  • (sk)eyesofocher

    hahaha so true though. Burt tongue from the beautiful ramen....
    re: XD I knew you would! Just like my sister lolol. And you have to read it from the beginning but I'll post more noooooooow since it's already written, but soon you guys will have to wait a bit coz I have writers block *sad face*


    5 months ago

  • Paisley Blue

    :( don't be too harsh on the poor dude--it was just to eager to taste the magic of that delicious pasta!
    hope you're okay ;) fun piece


    5 months ago

  • Cosmogyral

    felt that. // the drama. the betrayal. oh! how scandalous!


    5 months ago

  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: aww, thank you!!


    5 months ago

  • Rohan’s Defender

    Hahahaha! Nice one, Beth!! How’re ya?


    5 months ago