Huba Huba

United States

Writer, poet, musician, wanna-be-botanist.
Sleep deprived.
Call me a monster, I put milk in before the cereal.
I'm probably eating ramen right now or having a mental breakdown.
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Joined: May 26, 2020

Message to Readers

I've been so busy these days, especially with my school's Science Olympiad tryouts!
I was about to make this poem seem meaningful but it came out science related, that's for studying too much.

Hands

September 20, 2020

FREE WRITING

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My hands are blue 
They're increasing in density
They're shrinking in size
    as the red on the thermometer drops

I blow warm air, but the my hands remain blue
I rub them together, but they turn a darker hue
I clutch my blanket, but it's still the same
    as I cannot raise the red 

Until your hand surrounds my hands
    As heated particles excite each other
        Yours excite mine. 
 

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2 Comments
  • Vicarious

    Reply: Thank you! I love your way of language also :)
    Secondly, I am in love with this piece (along with your other writing pieces, of course)


    about 1 year ago
  • SunV

    Firstly, this piece is amazing. When I read the first two stanzas, I thought someone was dying, but then the last stanza is so heartwarming (Literally!)

    About the historical fiction competition, I didn't plan on entering because:

    1. I hate history (Like as a school subject)
    2. I had absolutely no inspiration!

    But then they announced trial reopenings of schools in my country, and I started thinking about how we would start to function regularly, which led me to think about how they restarted life during the Spanish flu, which was the topic I initially planned on writing on, but didn't have any ideas... Anyways, I think inspiration can come from anywhere, but sometimes it doesn't come at all. Hope you enter the speech writing competition thought! Would love to see what you've got!


    about 1 year ago