Samina

India

Common girl with uncommon dreams.
Perspiration always turns to perfection :-)
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Poet????

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differences

October 4, 2020

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phosphene was your vicinity
from aurora, you turned to ineffable trauma
mourning for a mirage
you made me breathe in blasphemy
I realized the differences


frost is my love, crystalline sparking in my heart. I sunbath to melt the ice before it takes grip of my heartbeats
my lungs get a spark from a dust particle giving me breathlessness but it doesn’t seem new to be I have faced it when someone shoveled the soil of my heart


phosphene was your vicinity
from aurora, you turned to ineffable trauma
mourning for a mirage
you made me breathe in blasphemy
I realized the differences
word count 103
date published 21-9-2020

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6 Comments

  • Writing4Life

    Re: Thanks! Haha if you want to :P


    2 months ago

  • Eblinn

    ooh this is gorgeous! it almost feels like a chant, a beautifully haunting one.


    2 months ago

  • Kalleigh_Cat1008

    This is so amazing! I love how mature and metaphoric it is. I like that it seems like you emphasized each stanza differently. You used italics in the first and last stanza, but not the second stanza, and instead made it bold. I like that. Also, your vocabulary is outstanding! :D


    2 months ago

  • buddingauthor

    Aaaahhh!! This is stunning!!!
    Re: Thank you!! I'm doing good, how about you? I had a lot on my plate, plua good old writer's block, so I couldn't really come on here. But now that I'm back, I don't feel like leaving. And I missed you too!! Its crazy how we haven't even met, but it feels like we know each other really well.


    2 months ago

  • Tayyaba

    if u really are a you-tuber then i am absolutely interested


    2 months ago

  • Paisley Blue

    So beautiful <3 I really love this!!!


    2 months ago