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I wouldn't say delighted or surprised, but it definitely moved me. There's so much in this poem that I understand, and so much that I can't relate to at all. It's a great balance and really made me feel.
You talk about these scenarios, when you smell food but can't eat, and you see sunlight and shut your curtains. Why? What makes it so hard to start the day or swallow down food? Lack of motivation? Past experience? And how can you portray that in this poem?
This is beautiful, honest, and heartbreaking. Well done.
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