KBridget
United States
-16 years old
-Pansexual/Poly
-They/Them
-My life is just one big panic attack
-Real name is Kayla
Message from Writer
"When you make the effort to speak someone else's language, even if it's just basic phrases here and there, you are saying to them, 'I understand that you have a culture and identity that exists beyond me. I see you as a human being” -Trevor Noah
"One page of the Bible isn't worth a life" -Wrabel
"If your religion requires you to hate someone; you need a new religion.”- Ricky Gervais
"Remember kids, if you don't sin, Jesus died for nothing." - also Ricky Gervais
“Throw me to the wolves and I will return leading the pack.” -Suzanne Collins
6 Comments
midnight.summerrose
This is just amazing!!! It’s so hauntingly beautiful!! :)
happygiggles
replying- My apologies for interpreting it wrong, now that I read it again, I realize. Again, still a very beautiful and informative poem. (:
happygiggles
A very eye-opening and informative poem. If I am correct, I believe this poem is about a person struggling with an eating disorder, which I think is very suitable to post at the current moment in time as sadly I have noticed that eating disorders are being glamourized all over different social media platforms. People need to open their eyes and see that eating disorders are not just looking small and politely declining a cupcake. Thank you for posting this, it is a very well written poem and I look forward to seeing what you will write in the future! (:
sci-Fi
Review on the way!
~wildflower~
A lovely, sad poem, and a beautiful title!
_lx
I think this poem is written very good but there are some grammatical things that I'd add such as more periods and commas at the end of connecting stanzas so I can know where one line stops and another begins. The descriptive language used to describe your sensory experiences are the highlight of this poem! There isn't much else that I think is necessary to change other than some grammatical issues but anyways, great job!