Cosmogyral

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i never wanted aottsisfts to be romantic

an ode to the stars i stole from the sky

September 19, 2020

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THIS IS A COLLECTION OF POEMS UNDER A SINGLE TITLE.

IX.
 The world was ending without a sunset.
     So I stopped time at the fabled dawn,
and I will pluck the sun from the sky.
     For is it not a star as well?

What did you think when you read that? Just tell me, please, even if it was an unintelligible image that flashed across your mind for the briefest second.

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3 Comments
  • Minvra

    Novem
    It's I can feel emotion radiating throughout this all. "Without no sunset"
    Is this you trying to savor each moment? Or inspiration?


    3 months ago
  • rainandsonder

    wow this is !! "the world was ending without a sunset", "I will pluck the sun from the sky" agh i don't have the brain cells to articulate my thoughts but i love this sm!


    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    Hmm, this didn't give me an image so much as a feeling of... disappointment? Idk I like it though!


    5 months ago