Peer Review by Ferriswheel (United States)

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By: Tayyaba


What do you think?
You are better than me.
When you let me down,
and criticize on me.
You do it twice,
I ignore it thrice.
When I touch the skies,
and see tears in your eyes.
you might have thought,
your words hurt me,
But you are the one,
who is getting on her knee.

I absolutely appreciate when some one supports me,  but i am literally allergic from criticism.

Peer Review

It's a great emotional piece which moved me by the simplest ways. No complications. Just emotions.

There isn't much that I would add other then maybe capitalization and punctuation. After periods or beginning of lines, capitalization is nice.

Reviewer Comments

I loved this piece!